A couple of years ago, I asked my Grade 10 ESL learners what aspect of English class they considered the most challenging. The answer was writing. They found writing difficult because they were short of ideas. Indeed, to have enough ideas, ESL learners need to read and collect information from various sources. That is why I hardly ever assign writing prompts out of context. Generally, I give my students writing prompts based on a text, video or multiple texts we have read in class, so they can skillfully select, organize, and reinvest new information and language in an original written production.
Of course, it is important to nurture students’ creativity and allow them to use their imagination by offering them quick writes or creative writing projects. However, when teaching a specific genre of writing in a mixed-ability classroom or to teenagers with learning difficulties, direct instruction and guided writing practice are always my go-to approaches. Even though I know that opinion text writing is a genre that students already discussed in Grade 9, I never assume that they all know how to properly write an opinion piece when they arrive in Grade 10 or 11.
PERSUASIVE WRITING WORKSHOP
When I teach the opinion text to my Grade 10-11 learners, I use different sources to model text structure. By exposing learners to varied text types and offering them different kinds of activities during our writing workshop, they are not only developing writing skills but also other ESL competencies/skills such as oral interaction (speaking) and reinvestment of understanding of texts (reading and listening skills). Moreover, it is important to choose a topic that appeals to the student population. For instance, most teenage learners are often tired and sleepy in class, but little might they know about the scientific reasons behind their constant fatigue. That is why I like to introduce my writing workshop on the opinion piece with a discussion about sleep deprivation leading to the guiding question: Should the school day start later? This is an issue that teenagers can personally relate to.
Once learners have shared their personal experiences about being sleep-deprived teens, I continue with a TED Talk presentation to engage them and have them gather information for the opinion text they need to write at the end of the workshop. I usually show students one of my favourite TED Talks and excellent persuasive speech Why school should start later for teens by Wendy Troxel. Before watching, I set the purpose for listening by asking students to draw a T-chart in their notebook so they can record all the advantages and disadvantages of starting the school day later while watching the video. I also invite them to pay attention to the techniques the speaker is using to grab their attention at the beginning, the way she is introducing her thesis and arguments, and the way she is closing her speech. I also remind learners to particularly pay attention to the end of the video when the speaker is inviting her audience to reflect on the issue raised in her presentation.
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After watching, learners share their observations about the techniques used to persuade the audience, possibly administrators, politicians and people who have the power to change things in the community. Then, we also discuss the pros and cons they have recorded in their notebook. Discussing Wendy Troxel’s speech as a whole class is not only an opportunity to assess learners’ understanding, but it also helps weaker students jot down some ideas they might have missed while watching. After the whole-class discussion, I like to put students in small discussion teams (2 or 3 students) and ask them to list more examples of pros and cons from their experience.
After carrying out this activity, learners continue working in small teams. To gather more information about the issue, I assign them two short articles in which they have to find the most relevant ideas to complete their pros and cons list. Of course, you may also assign this activity as individual work if you prefer so.
I usually select articles related to the issue from the website newsela.com where you can choose the difficulty level of the texts; thus, they are ideal for differentiation. These articles are for ELA learners, but most of the texts are suitable for ESL students, as well. You will have to create an account to get access to the content, but their basic account is free.
Here are some selected articles from the website Newsela that you may assign to your learners, but you will also find a lot of other relevant articles online:
Later to rise, not earlier to bed, for today’s tired teens, doctors say
Later start times, less homework to help students cope with stress
Study shows kids’ brains work better with more naps
Giving schools a later start would create a huge financial benefit
New research on deep sleep helps solve the mystery of memory
Please verify the above texts to decide if they are appropriate for your learners.
By now, students’ pros and cons list should contain enough ideas. Although they have enough content to work with, they still need to know how to organize their ideas coherently. So, this is the moment when I walk learners through the structure of a persuasive/opinion text using direct instruction and guided writing practice.
DIRECT INSTRUCTION AND GUIDED WRITING PRACTICE
Wendy Troxel’s presentation is an exemplary persuasive speech that students can learn so much from, but I want to expose them to written works, as well. I usually use two mentor texts. One of them is a short text helping even my struggling learners to grasp the most important elements of a well-structured opinion piece, the other one is a more developed text in response to our writing prompt: Should the school day start later?
The reason why I would want to give my students mentor texts written on the same issue is not only a personal choice, but it is also a differentiated learning technique allowing learners to receive more guidance and support in developing good writing skills. On the one hand, I can use these mentor texts to model content, structure, and language. On the other hand, opinion text models on the same issue will give struggling writers more confidence when they need to write their own piece of writing at the end of the workshop. If you worry about students copying the exact sentences from these texts, state your expectations clearly, and everything should be fine.
When I guide my students through the steps of writing an opinion piece, I use the opinion text guided writing workbook I have designed for my ESL learners and have improved over the years. This differentiated guided writing study guide is available in both print and paperless options.
By the end of this writing workshop, learners should have acquired all the necessary skills to confidently write their opinion piece addressing the guiding question proposed at the beginning of our workshop: Should the school day start later?
If you need engaging and practical resources to teach persuasive writing, check out these differentiated opinion text guided writing workbooks here:
Happy teaching!
Kynga C.
